Gaia Holmes’ “Where the road runs out”: a labour of love


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It’s hard to keep track of what’s about, what’s in, what’s out in the bubble of the self-defining poetry world. New collections and pamphlets and chapbooks and pamphlets appear on a weekly basis, and of the ones I manage to get hold of some are good and some are not, and some are so-so. But only a very few are special, ones that haul you in, won’t let go, make your nerves and your heart more alive and alert. This year, I’ve already written about one such collection: Clare Shaw’s Flood. I suspect that Tom Weir’s Ruin will prove to be one, and also Julia Deakin’s Sleepless. And now, here’s the third (and, I think) the best collection yet from Gaia Holmes: Where the road runs out.

Regular readers will see that she’s been a guest on the cobweb three times already, and her poems have appeared in other posts, too. But I’m frequently surprised by how many poets I know don’t know about her. I was at The Poetry Business yesterday, and enthusing about her to as many folks as would listen…about half of them didn’t know her work. She seems to be one of those genuine stars who fly below the radar. It’s my mission to correct this state of affairs. Let me introduce her:

As well as being a familiar face on the local (Calderdale) poetry scene, she has read at literary festivals throughout Britain and beyond. Her poem ‘Claustrophobia’ was highly commended in the best individual poem category of the Forward Poetry Prize, 2007; ‘A homesick truckie In The Algarve’ was the featured poem in Frieda Hughes’ weekly literary column in ‘The Times’ (May 2007). Currently she runs the Halifax-based writing workshop ‘Igniting the spark’

There are many poets around Calderdale who’ll testify to the richness of these workshops, my publisher Bob Horne,  and the hugely talented Natalie Rees among them. Her  first full length collection, was Dr James Graham’s Celestial Bed in 2006. and her second Lifting the piano with one hand in 2013 [both publ. by The Comma Press]. Joan Jobe Smith has called her ‘my favourite contemporary female poet’. She’s not alone in that.

Jane Draycott talks about the point where a poem detonates.  Gaia’s poems often put me in mind of Chemistry lessons in the blissfully pre-Health and Safety 1950’s, when to demonstrate the meaning of the word crepitation a teacher would toss a slack handful of crystals (potassium?) into a sinkful of water and stand well back. So many poems in Where the road runs out detonate in line after line, like dangerous Rice Krispies. But because many of her poems are about separation and loss of love or lovers, and in this collection, of a father…..sometimes tender and sometimes vengeful, sometimes wistful and sometimes heartbreaking…….. they also take a reader into dark woods and lose her. Like this one

Road salt

Snow falls plumply, prettily,

whites out the dog-eared leavings

of Christmas,

dolls-up the ragged end of January,

mutes the road between us

with its whispering glamour

and we’re stuck –

you in the East and me in the West

with miles too thick and deep to cross

and, once again,

without you, I fall asleep

listening to the frost

patterning the insides of my windows,

laquering the edges of my bed.

If I could

I would send you

seal-skin boots and brandy.

I would send a sledge

and a savvy husky to guide you

across the blinded miles,

but instead I go out

into the bright, dumb darkness

with my pockets full of road salt,

toss it to the night

like chicken feed,

try to melt myself

a path to you.

I hope that, like me,  you’re snagged and reeled in by listening to frost, understanding its cold, lacquering glamour, and being out in the bright, dumb dark; a folktale world of snow and lost girls, and chickens that make me think of Baba Yaga and her  house on hen’s legs.  There’s a lot of ice (and also stars, and milk and fire) in Gaia’s poems ; there’s even an Ice Hotel in an earlier collection. There’s the cold of loneliness and love gone wrong, and broken things that might be hearts or dreams which make you think twice about walking in bare feet. There’s the orphan voice of a narrator who sees things that no-one seems to notice her seeing.

The Allure Of Frost
Boxing day.
No fire in the grate and unopened presents
stacked around the base of the tree and fairy lights muted,
switched off, and the brandy that swells the fruit starting to eat
the cake in its tin and all the mirrors doused with tea towels
and your raw-eyed mother keening into a pillow in her bedroom
and too many men in black whispering and nodding
and I don’t know what the rosary is and whether to curtsey
to the priests when I hand them their tea
and the phrase ‘fruits of thy womb’ seem too ripe and too rich
for this and, Mary mother of God, I don’t know
how to cross myself and fear I’m invoking the devil
and the scent of death’s so thick
that it’s tainted the water and it’s heavy in the curtains
making them bend the rail
and your lips taste of the oils that grease your dead sister
and when I kiss you, you push me away and I want to spit
and weep and slap the corpse where she lies in her coffin
all done-up with hair grips and lipstick,
her sunken cheeks plumped out with wads of cotton wool
and the rictus of sin softened
by the crust of Rimmel Natural Beige powdering her face
and it’s so hot in here
that the cheese is sweating and the butter is liquid.
The chocolate coins are dripping from the tree.
Your Aunt’s un-bitten sandwiches
are curling upwards on her plate
and the lilies are wilting and stinking in their vases
and the cat stands quivering and retching
against the cold crack beneath the back door.
Outside the frost, not knowing any difference,
continues to sparkle. And I’d like to go out there.
I’d like to stand in it until my feet turn blue.

I think this has everything in it that I think of as a Gaia Holmes poem. The piling on and on of sensory detail, the Alice in Wonderland sense that the logic of things is wrong; the wistfulness, the vulnerablity, and the pluck of a girl who will stand in a sparkling frost till her feet turn blue and the world becomes real again. It also has the undertow of of a diffuse guilt about religious uncertainty  (which resurfaces in The Lord’s Prayer, a poem with a sting in its tail)

and I don’t know what the rosary is 
……..and, Mary mother of God, I don’t know
how to cross myself

There’s a more worldly voice, too. I’m struggling to make up my mind about which poem to choose , but I plump for this one.


You reach a certain stage in your life
when you seem to spend a lot of time
holding other people’s babies.

At parties, the bottles of M & S berry crushes
on the kitchen table
outnumber the bottles of wine
and it seems you’re the only one drinking.

Tonight you’re nursing your second glass of Chianti,
warming it against your chest
as the other guests sip Mocktails
and talk of teething rings and Farley’s rusks
and you’re trying to find a way in, but failing

and one of the kids is doing that cute thing again
with his hat pulled down to his nose
and everyone starts taking photos
and clucking and cooing and you take one too
just to fit in, even though you know
that you’ll delete it later
in favour of a landscape
or something you can understand
or something you can have

and you want a cigarette but no one’s smoking
so you go and stand outside the front door in the sleet
to smoke a roll-up but it gets wet
and you’re sucking on nothing

so you go back in. You cut through the branny fug
of milk and nappies with your reek of smoke
and they look at you cow-eyed with pity
and you know they’ve been talking about you
and one of them says “It’s not too late at forty”

and you mumble something and walk into the kitchen
to pour yourself another bigger glass of wine
and you sit there for a while listening to them talking
and think about the things they have:
the husbands, the high chairs, the family-sized toasters,
the pairs of tiny red wellies lined up by the door,
the huge American fridges
covered with glitter-crusted playschool pictures
and you think about your lack.

You think about your cat that moved next door,
your scrawny Basil plants withering on the windowsill,
the bread you bake always turning black

and you go back into the lounge,
move mounds of small, pale woollen things off a chair
and sit down wishing you had some ballast in your pockets,
wishing you were not made of straw and dry things,
wishing you were not quite so old and flammable
because they’re all looking at you
and it seems you’ve turned into
the hollow witch levitating in the corner,
that lonely, awful thing
that they could have become.

The first time I heard this it took me aback. It’s a great poem to read aloud, working out the breathing-through of long, burgeoning sentences. But a second reading picks out the trademark observation, those sensory images that are always surprisingly right…that branny fug, for instance, and the incredibly frustrating business of sucking on a wet roll-up, sucking on nothing, surrounded by Farley’s rusks and Milton, and milky babies, and mounds of small, pale woollen things. So far so ‘Guardian’ till the poem takes a tilt into something darker, and it’s the darkness of the folktale and the fairy godmother who may have things in her heart that you don’t want to know about, wishing she were not made of straw and dry things  /  the hollow witch levitating. Don’t tell me that last verb didn’t catch you out.

In case you should think that the world of the poems is always cold and frost-bound and the heroine ‘helpless’ there are poems like Rain charm for Stirling Street that are funny, extravagant, and where the heroine becomes downright gleefully dangerous

Rain Charm For Stirling Street

Oh, the itch and nag of it-

……. in the fridge
milk thickens and clots
in the necks of bottles,
the cheese gets louder and louder
until it roars.


I am taking action.
I am standing behind the kitchen door
wobbling a cross hatch saw
to make the sound of thunder.
I am cooking lightning
in the microwave.
I am pouring rice on to a saucer
to make the sound of rain.
I am summoning a storm.

You know what? I believe Gaia Holmes can make rain. I know that cheeses can roar. I take that as the West Riding dialect word for ‘weeping’. ‘Give ovver roaring or I’ll give you summat to roar ovver’ my Gran would say.

There are so many riches in the collection: the joy and lyricism of Hope, the wild fantasy of Imported goods, the quiet and accurate observation of Bloom, the indignant comic voice of The runners versus the ramblers, the psychic dark of Shadow play, the surrealism of Last order and This monstrous hole. And then there’s a self-contained sequence, Remembering light about the trapped Chilean miners of the San Jose mine in 2010. If that was all there was, this would still be a stand-out collection.

What takes it to an altogether different level, however, is the sequence that opens the book, and which is referenced at several points throughout. Some collections have at their heart something particular, powerfully felt, personal and universally engaging. Kim Moore’s Art of falling has that sequence that draws on the experience of domestic abuse. Fiona Benson’s Bright travellers is lifted out of the merely good by her poems about childbirth and miscarriage. The core of Clare Shaw’s Flood  is rooted in her experience of the devastating flooding of her home town, which is at once a singular history and a universal metaphor. Where the road runs out is made remarkable by the poems which deal with the death of Gaia’s father.

David Holmes, you learn through these poems, was a stubborn, fiercely independent, difficult and, in more ways than one, remote father. A potter, he lived on a small bleak Orkney island, treeless, stormswept.  Elwick Mill was a recalcitrant renovation project, and David mainly lived in a caravan on the property. Over many months, Gaia, her brothers, her mother, her partner would make the long journey north, where the roads run out, to nurse him (which he fiercely resisted) in the late stages of his terminal cancer.  Finally, Gaia was with him in his last days, and these are last days’ poems.

The book begins by putting you in the landscape.

And still we keep on singing

Up here the hours go backwards

and we’re closer to the edge of things.

Up here you have to know the language of the wind,

you have to understand the manners of mist and riptides

in order to go to sleep singing,

in order to wake up

on the brighter side of life.

Some days sunlight sugars the island.

Cats lie on their backs bleaching their bellies,

seals bask on the rocks, braise their lovely fat

until it’s close to boiling point.

Orange crocosmia burns gently

around the mill dam.

Every kitchen smells of bread .

The world hums as it hangs out its washing.

Other days we gag on the reek of drift tide rot.

Broken gulls and fulmars

float in the harbour

like oily rags.

Damp socks and dresses

freeze and stiffen on the washing line.

A furze of  haar blots out our thin and precious light.

The glow of the mainland, that cosy grail we cling to,

that glimmer of cars, buses, shops and  living,

disappears in to the dark, monstrous mouth

of the island where lightbulbs shatter and fuses blow

and we’re left with singed fingers, the thick stink of wax

and candles whose wicks are too damp and weak

to sustain a flame.

The image of the candles is real and perfect; things cling to life and light and warmth, but the whole business is ultimately exhausting.

My father is fevered and godless.

My father is dying on an island

with no trees.

I send him prayers.

I send him bulging sacks of autumn leaves.    (Leaves)

In his caravan with its cracked windows, hugging the damp, your denial , this father

surrounds himself with the lying dog-eared books / How to outsmart you cancer and his

daughter has to assert that

I belong here,

Mistress of Haar, Our Lady of the Seals,

your angel, your fumbling nurse, your little star,

stumbling around in your size 10 wellies

and your clay-crusted fleece,

stubbing my toes on shadows,   (I belong here)

Those who have never had to care for the terminally ill or the terminally old might not

anticipate that their care and their love can be received by what seems like ingratitude;

the dying can be awkward, cantankerous, bloody-minded, resentful. They can be in

denial, and they are strangers to serenity. Maybe it’s fear, or maybe it’s some visceral

survival instinct. But to the carer, believe me, it hurts. I thought I’d understood and dealt

with my mother’s protracted dying, but these poems shone a new and healing light on it.

They do what good art should do. They enlighten. Which is a layered word if ever there

was one. These poems will strike a chord with, potentially, thousands of children and

partners who thought no one understood that

grief needs feeding ( Kummerspeck)

because you have no choice, and would want no choice..or you’ve chosen, because, as the

poet says, defiantly,  I belong here / with your dying / and every dawn sky / seething / and

blistered / with stars.

It’s defiance that’s needed in the teeth of anger of frustration that no one can condemn in

the dying

(from) Feckless

Sometimes it makes him angry, this dying,

and I keep doing things wrong,

Forgodsake, he says, still strong enough

to make the caravan shake,

to make the clock fall off the wall,

to scare the fat white cats

from where they lay

scorching their fur on the gas fire.


And I know that I’ve lost

my angel’s status

but I’m trying.


The island whimpers

and trembles beneath us.

There will be bruises

in the morning

Forgodsake, he says.


I sit at his bedside sucking my knuckles

until he slips in to fevered sleep

then I jog barefoot around the mill

in the frost to remind myself

that sometimes I need to suffer.

There it is again, that image of self-mortification, and the salt shock of frost that tells you

you are who you are, and you are real. There are moments of respite, though and they

come quiet and healing, especially in these extracts from Hygge: 

Tonight, with you calm, clean,

smelling of lavender in your new pyjamas

I light all the candles I can find,

put Tallis on the stereo, sit holding your hand.


Tonight, the sea will be too wanton

to carry a ferry.


Tonight we will keep the cats in.

Tonight, we will be landlocked


Tonight I will feel your knots unravelling,

our bond thickening

as love and thin motets chase the cold

from the corners of the room,

and I will almost forget that you are dying.


In the meantime we have to survive as best we might. Which is why I particularly love

the next poem that brings together those strands of folk tale and their vulnerable

resilient youngest sons and daughters, and of the crafted textures and sensory reality of

this lovely collection.

Stone Soup.   ***

Up here every night,

just for the hope

and the blessing

of something steaming

and bubbling on the hob,

I cook us stone soup.

The thin broth

tastes of the sea,

reminds you of how,

only weeks ago,

you’d scramble

over the shingle,

happy to bruise your shins

in the Bay of Balfour,

gulping down the briny air,

savouring its myth,

its tang, its babble.

Now you are bed-bound,


so I tack a crumpled sea-view

from an old National Geographic

across your window,

bring the tide home

in old pickle jars,

pour grains of sand

into your cupped palms,

sing you to sleep

with hissing lullabies,

press crystals of salt

onto the tip of your tongue.


What will survive of us is love. I keep typing that. What I want now is for this collection

to be given the recognition it deserves, I want it to win prizes, and I finally want to be

able to tell poets about Gaia Holmes and not need to explain who she is.

Gaia Holmes’ poetry to buy….you know Christmas is upon us.

Where the road runs out. [Comma Press ]£9.99

Dr James Graham’s Celestial Bed  [Comma press 2006]

via Amazon: anything from £15 – £65

Lifting the piano with one hand      [Comma Press 2013]  £7.99

You can buy direct from Comma Press via

There’s currently a reduced price on ‘Where the road runs out’

Tales from the Tachograph   (co-authored with Winston Plowes)

[Calder Valley Press, 2017). £7.00

For anyone puzzled by ‘stone soup’ it’s made from cunning, resourcefulness, self-belief and hope. First, catch your stone.

4 thoughts on “Gaia Holmes’ “Where the road runs out”: a labour of love

  1. Gaia’s poems draw you up and draw you in. Her word choices and combinations have a vitality and force which propel themselves from the page to the reader. Thank you for the recommend. I will seek out more.

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